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 Post subject: i know they suck, tear them apart =D
PostPosted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 7:42 pm 
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(sorry about having you click the links but for some reason it keeps saying "Your images may only be up to 900 pixels wide." when the widths are onlyy like 400 lol soo please clicky! ((or ddont....up to you(((a third parenthesis inside!!))) back to 2)) and now ending one!)

http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff184/gohan_pwns_all/Otherguywitmeessedupfeet.jpg?t=1289867954

http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff184/gohan_pwns_all/Guy.jpg?t=1289867954

http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff184/gohan_pwns_all/Dlandguy.jpg?t=1289868013

http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff184/gohan_pwns_all/A-guy.jpg?t=1289868037

Sorry for 3/4 being in pencil.... didnt feel like inking but i wanted to share them =D

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 Post subject: Re: i know they suck, tear them apart =D
PostPosted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 11:58 pm 
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I'm sorry, I just now saw your topic post. The one that had the best design element was the last one Even though you didn't finish it, it portrayed may of the principles of design which I liked a lot. A lot of peope on here do not do that.

The structure of your characters hands need to be worked on, while drawing I suggest you look at your own hand for reference and just draw what you see. Another problem is your drawings are all generic, the same stuff you can find just by googling anime, and each character has the same body/head type. Nothing is changing but the hair, and outfit. This is something alittle extra from me, take it how you wish; anime is a linear drawing scheme and style, 90% of it is the same drawing setup with nothing really changing about the characters. Which is why it is very linear. I would suggest moving outward to othe rooms of cartooning, stylized, and representational drawings if you wish to approve.

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 Post subject: Re: i know they suck, tear them apart =D
PostPosted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 3:43 pm 
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hey thanks for writing all that out it truly does help. honestly, i know that alot of manga looks almost the same as the next but i always thought that at least my style was different then the stuff you would find on google but i really do appreciate you telling me that so i can continue to work on my style. thanks alot i really appreciate it!


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 Post subject: Re: i know they suck, tear them apart =D
PostPosted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 5:14 pm 
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Good drawings. I'm not sure what that is behind the guy in the first picture though.


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 Post subject: Re: i know they suck, tear them apart =D
PostPosted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 5:29 pm 
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hey me neither! lol thanks for looking


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 Post subject: Re: i know they suck, tear them apart =D
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Haha. I was actually thinking something between a ball and a sword :)


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 Post subject: Re: i know they suck, tear them apart =D
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This is a good starting point. I see a bit of DBZ and naruto influence in there. I would say work on how things lay on top of eachother (like crossed legs folded arms) so that they look more natural and not so uncomfortable.

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 Post subject: just to keep this thread alive XD
PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2010 7:00 pm 
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once again im truly sorry for the link!!!

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