Mr.OC

Yeah is like a better Mizu XD

That's awesome!

alienninja
Were you referring to the thick lines? Sketch lines I use SAI marker tool hence they appear light. Lineart, I use the pen tool with a size of 1/4th the marker size I used...here in 5px. I use blackest black...probably the lines are too thin that they look grey.

HolyFuggnuggets
Hello thar

CelestialFox
Thanks master. It's nice that you remembered the name of a commoner >.>

Shiny and EfrieredNihil
With all due respect, Mizukiyanagi and myself are in different planes of the art world
It is completely wrong to compare our works because our paths do not intersect

WannabeMangaKa
Thanks

Title: Powerless before the King
Character: Tear (my MH Character)
Armor: Kaiser X (Female)
Weapon: Teostra GS (G and H versions look the same anyway )
-I do not care about proportions or anatomy >.>
-the details killed me
-In the end, I decided to go full body
-tweaked for the loli factor 8D though she isn't completely loli because I used 7 heads scale

Ahhh, I love the way you draw feet--

Master.

nice and clean I like your style

CelestialFox
That's a nice compliment since I'm getting demotivated by feet because they're too hard to draw...like hands
I need to practice them

GunZet
Thanks man
Getting myself killed by detail obsession seems worth it
*dies*

Title: Blunderous Maid
Character: Unnamed (OC)
-I felt like drawing frills and all and I guess it went overboard xP
-added a little extra just for the lolz
-by the way, I don't think this is classifiable as material for 18+
-and I didn't think of anatomy and proportion
-just plain bored and the need to draw frilly objects

Welcome back. Nice frills.

Her left shoulder is creepin me out though.

Hello thar almighty god,
You didn't like the puffed sleeves? o_0
or I probably messed it up by putting armpit folds xP
haha
I knew I should've turned into a puffed frilled sleeve...>.>

Nice and as cypress said, the left shoulder is rather creepy DX

Colour those pictures! NOW! XD

Are you guys trying to tell me that I should remove the puffed sleeve because I suck at trying to do that and so as to leave her shoulders bare for everyone to see and increase the fanservice factor by nth value because not only does it present the foot fetish and the panty shot, it would also have the glory of the armpit fetish o_0

lol xD

No, its the anatomy on the left shoulder taht is off. and it looks rather creepy

I red lined it myself lol
-I don't get what's wrong >.>
-The pluffed sleeve is wrong? I have no idea how it behaves at such a bend though
-I proposed another sleeve position in blue
-In red is the anatomy lines

It's as the others said, the first thing that came in my eyes were her shoulder.

But dude... even so, your art is awesome !

I didn't realize it was a puffy sleeve. My bad. It's just that the right shoulder looks bare yet the left one doesn't (and, assuming it was bare, I was like "OMG"). But yeah. I'd go with what you have in the update. The blue line. It makes it more clear that she's wearing puffy sleeves. Also, some nice stretching on the sleeve would probably hit the point home a lot better. Aside from that, her shins are different lengths when put into "perspective sense". Though her right shin is pointing more directly at the viewer, it is still longer than the left. The left should appear longer due to the less direct perspective.