GunZetWell if it's something about how the mouth is drawn in style I can change that howeve if it's just the expression with regards to the pose, I cant because the character was meant to be that retarded >__>
Generally I want them mouths to be simple, kinda hard to draw detailed mouths swallowing something if you know what I mean Dx
anywayz, thanks for the heads up, I might be able to do something probably in future stuff.
LinzAye, I enjoyed doing them boots really because I was trying to retain the figure of a
school shoes with the strap and socks into one thing.
Colored version of previous sketch
-Tweaked some stuff because they were off in the line art
-The background is a product of boredom actually the whole thing is >_>
-It feels nice that no one else (based on extensive searching) has done something as radical as this with regards to touhou characters...images of Marisa in her usual costume are very common and kinda sickening if you think about it...xD
-I'm thinking of doing some more touhou characters in reinvented costumes xDDD, it's kinda fun trying to retain dress elements to some degree.

I actually planned to post this at the new forum but after registering and checking conditions and stuff, realized that the forum beats the purpose of me joining mt...lol
-must not post images at crit corner if not needed to be crit = use gallery
Checked gallery and it seems that album images should be uploaded...beats the purpose of me using DA as image dump site...and there's also no url link for image to album at least so that I don't use up space if any, so yeah
-post limits
If I can't post comments this long then that totally destroys my usual critiquing as this is my standard wall crit if anyone remembers the time I was generous in giving opinion
In short, it became complicated and not as flexible as this old forum is, hmm, so I find no reason to get active there and sadly I read somewhere that this old one gets blasted away in the end of the month!!!!!111...So this may be farewell!!
Ta-ta!! At least I posted a fairly decent image as a last hurrah xD
Being here in MT was a big help, 3-4ish years and I was able to raise my 0 skills (check first page, first post) to actual poster-ized images in my organization. Many thanks really! To my gods and influences: CypressDahlia, Darkmousysminion, Resalan, Mok, Faust, Doghateburger, your relentless display of skill has really made me strive for the best! To the members who kept on bugging me /jk, you know who you are, in PMs and those who generally made me stop to crit...thanks for the opportunity!
tl;dr
I find it funny that this ends in the same year with me graduating from college...the end is surely near xD
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-fixed shading on some parts that are weird
-nipple position adjusted (cant believe I got that one wrong)