Solana Chapter 1

seukai · **Posted:** Wed Apr 21, 2010 4:23 pm

I think I'll need to plan out my dialogues a little better.
but I think i'm getting better at this paradox I call writing...

Shiny · **Posted:** Wed Apr 21, 2010 5:23 pm

What? I think the dialogue is fine. Like I love the way you did the bully and the way you made him talk.

Sottaceti · **Posted:** Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:55 pm

God... Oh, what a turnoff. :\
Fantastic art/execution, though.

seukai · **Posted:** Wed Apr 21, 2010 9:00 pm

Sottaceti wrote:

God... Oh, what a turnoff. :\
Fantastic art/execution, though.

WHAT?! where? turnoff where?! is something wrong?!

Celestial-Fox · **Posted:** Thu Apr 22, 2010 3:14 am

I love how the style changes to fit the mood. It looks really good so far.

sanny1064 · **Posted:** Thu Apr 22, 2010 5:46 pm

dude this looks awesome!!
just don't make the main guy extremely emo.

WannabeMangaKa · **Posted:** Sat May 01, 2010 8:53 am

I really like it so far!

xX_TODDZILLA_Xx · **Posted:** Sat May 01, 2010 10:20 am

wow this is really impressive. im really looking forward to seeing what comes next. and i really like the style. both that and the story kinda give of this dark vibe. i have the constant feeling like something bad is going to happen and feel my heart clinch a little. but i have to say, that makes me a little worried of reading more. but I'm still looking forward to seeing the next chapter

Rihdan · **Posted:** Mon May 03, 2010 12:47 am

I think it is really good keep up the good art.

seukai · **Posted:** Fri May 07, 2010 1:53 pm

hey everybody! Thanks for the comments
Currently I've finished my AP exam so now I can use up my free time until SAT's and then finals
woot!
Anyways, I finished laying out Chapter 1 so i won't be done until sunday probably...
I promise to plan out all of Chapter 2 before diving in so my process can be a little bit faster...

Celestial-Fox wrote:

I love how the style changes to fit the mood. It looks really good so far.

hahah that was me not following any pattern lol sorry...

xX_TODDZILLA_Xx wrote:

wow this is really impressive. im really looking forward to seeing what comes next. and i really like the style. both that and the story kinda give of this dark vibe. i have the constant feeling like something bad is going to happen and feel my heart clinch a little. but i have to say, that makes me a little worried of reading more. but I'm still looking forward to seeing the next chapter

You're right on the dot but that doesn't come until later

Read on, amigo!

Celestial-Fox · **Posted:** Sat May 08, 2010 12:10 am

The new pages are really wonderful. I like the balance between dialogue and narrative. My only crit would to maybe try to tighten the bubbles around the speech. Other than that, I love it and this is definitely the best comic you've started so far.

xX_TODDZILLA_Xx · **Posted:** Sun May 09, 2010 12:33 am

seukai wrote:

You're right on the dot but that doesn't come until later Read on, amigo!

i knew it *sigh* but i really hope it has a happy ending. there way too many things with sad ending anymore. and normally i really don't like those kinda stories. but i know your not going to tell me then ending, and neither would i want you to. but ill keep reading and hope for the best. so get the next pages done as soon as you can lol

Darkness9375 · **Posted:** Thu May 13, 2010 2:02 pm

Dam that is good

cant wait to see more

I really want to see your main guy kick the crap off of the buulies...

i hate bullies

Matt · **Posted:** Thu May 13, 2010 4:17 pm

I agree. The main character looks cool too.

But . . . why did he get hit by a shoe? *Waits for the next page*

And I saw no turnoffs at all. Nowhere. Not one line of art, nor one line of dialogue.

miKuru · **Posted:** Fri Jun 11, 2010 3:06 am

Love the manga and the characters in it.. Really amazing ^^

"sits in front of computer and waits for next page"

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