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NINJAofTHEdanceFLOOR
 Post subject: Just an idea I got while in the shower...like it?
PostPosted: Mon May 10, 2010 4:09 pm 
Some girls are normal teens in the Missouri of 2057. It's disgusting, dark, and empty. One day, a fairy comes to them and tells them their really fairies (each girl controls something, e.g. light, water, animals) that have to fix the world because the whole world is like that. They go to a training camp, and set off to fix the world. They have to use the thing they control to help them survive in the wilderness, because they can't just stay in a hotel.
My sister said it was Disney, but what do you think?


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 Post subject: Re: Just an idea I got while in the shower...like it?
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are you..what? what?

how old are you?

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Toast wrote:
are you..what? what?

how old are you?


hey hey calm ye down....
this is still an idea.
Just from looking at it.. it looks like a magic girl genres suited for young girls. Is that right?
If you are going for something different remember to make sure you keep the target audience in mind.
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seukai wrote:
Toast wrote:
are you..what? what?

how old are you?


hey hey calm ye down....
this is still an idea.
Just from looking at it.. it looks like a magic girl genres suited for young girls. Is that right?
If you are going for something different remember to make sure you keep the target audience in mind.

Agreed. When thinking up a plot you kinda need to plan for who you think is going to read this... Maybe if you toy with the idea you can make something that maybe is even better. Just saying...
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Celestial-Fox
 Post subject: Re: Just an idea I got while in the shower...like it?
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This really isn't a plot. Rather, it is a premise. Therefore, I cannot make any assumptions regarding the merit of the story.
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seukai
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Celestial-Fox wrote:
This really isn't a plot. Rather, it is a premise. Therefore, I cannot make any assumptions regarding the merit of the story.

I got the same conclusion. It's like being able to look at the ice cream container but not have a peek at the real color of it inside... get what I'm saying?
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Lucifer
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You thought of this... under the shower... silly goose were you doing?

Just kidding, but hasn't it been done already? W.I.T.C.H is something similar with regards to some 'ordinary girls appear to have magic powers and must set out to save the world, each of them controlling their own element'.

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Best story I've ever heard.

For a guy making up stories in his shower of course.

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NINJAofTHEdanceFLOOR
 Post subject: Re: Just an idea I got while in the shower...like it?
PostPosted: Mon May 17, 2010 4:40 pm 
Toast wrote:
are you..what? what?

how old are you?


i turned 11 about 2 months ago
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NINJAofTHEdanceFLOOR
 Post subject: Re: Just an idea I got while in the shower...like it?
PostPosted: Mon May 17, 2010 4:41 pm 
Tetsuphil wrote:
Best story I've ever heard.

For a guy making up stories in his shower of course.


you mean girl
and anyway, look at my age
i'm probably the youngest member on the forum. i already am on the Oekaki
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NINJAofTHEdanceFLOOR
 Post subject: Re: Just an idea I got while in the shower...like it?
PostPosted: Tue May 18, 2010 1:10 pm 
Lucifer wrote:
Just kidding, but hasn't it been done already? W.I.T.C.H is something similar with regards to some 'ordinary girls appear to have magic powers and must set out to save the world, each of them controlling their own element'.


oh yeaaaaahhhhh!!!!! it was on disney a few years ago, wasn't it???
oh well. back to the drawing board i go!
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Some zombies are normal "people" in the aftereffects of the global war of 2057. It's disgusting, dark, and lonely. One day, a biogenetically modified being comes to them and tells them they are really radiation-proof mutants, and have to fix the inhabitants of the earth to start a new beginning because the whole world in ruins and radiation-filled. They go to each radiation-filled area of the world. They have to use their mutations to help them survive in the wilderness, because they can't just stay in a hotel , duh..
My sister said it was Capcom, but what do you think?


This is what I would have done XD
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reminded me of magic knight rayearth..... a bit too much.
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