Bacon Art, C&C Very Appreciated: Anko Fan Art 1/5/11

ozzaharwood · **Posted:** Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:53 am

That drawing is p. good.

Bacon Barbarian · **Posted:** Sat Sep 04, 2010 1:57 pm

Now I just need to color it. Any critiqe?

Matt · **Posted:** Sat Sep 04, 2010 4:24 pm

The hand holding the chidori is good, but the hand holding the arm looks like the fingers start too close to the wrist. That's the mistake I make all the time. The face is too low, I think. He's kinda looking down, right? I think you should draw the eyes so that you can tell they're being viewed from above (if slightly). Same with the nose--not much you can do with the mouth on that.

EDIT: Whoops, forgot one. His right leg (our left)--either the leg is straight and too short or the knee is bent and doesn't look like it.

Dezardelm · **Posted:** Sun Sep 05, 2010 1:26 am

On Sasuke's right shoulder (our left), I would suggest bringing that shoulder in a bit (towards his head) or at least to the right a little bit (Sasuke's left).

Bacon Barbarian · **Posted:** Fri Sep 10, 2010 8:00 pm

Matt wrote:

The hand holding the chidori is good, but the hand holding the arm looks like the fingers start too close to the wrist. That's the mistake I make all the time. The face is too low, I think. He's kinda looking down, right? I think you should draw the eyes so that you can tell they're being viewed from above (if slightly). Same with the nose--not much you can do with the mouth on that.

EDIT: Whoops, forgot one. His right leg (our left)--either the leg is straight and too short or the knee is bent and doesn't look like it.

Yeah, probablly. I agree. I'm not sure about the face though. But thanks for the crit.

Dezardelm wrote:

On Sasuke's right shoulder (our left), I would suggest bringing that shoulder in a bit (towards his head) or at least to the right a little bit (Sasuke's left).

Yeah.

Thanks for the critique you guys.

More sketches.

Still working on colouring Sasuke, I've been busy with school and all...

Sottaceti · **Posted:** Fri Sep 10, 2010 9:27 pm

Nice eyes, nice torso, not a bad hand.

Bacon Barbarian · **Posted:** Sun Sep 19, 2010 5:51 pm

Thanks Sketty.

Got manga studio for my B-Day. Colored by hand fixed with the GIMP and effects added with Manga Studio. Party.

And since Ren is doing it I'll do it to

Spoiler! :

Bacon Barbarian · **Posted:** Tue Sep 21, 2010 7:37 pm

Aww, 3 people have said I'm bad ... >.> Oh well. MUST GET BETTER!!

...

More sketches. I feel like I should be doing something else ... Requests?

Egoslip · **Posted:** Tue Sep 21, 2010 9:03 pm

You're not that bad.. highly stylized though. Which can be a good thing, just don't forget to broaden your horizons

Sottaceti · **Posted:** Tue Sep 21, 2010 9:20 pm

Talk about clean lines, man.

Matt · **Posted:** Wed Sep 22, 2010 7:39 am

^

Do you use Gimp for ink?

Takeru · **Posted:** Wed Sep 22, 2010 2:03 pm

These are awesome.
I like the little sanji face lol

Bacon Barbarian · **Posted:** Wed Sep 22, 2010 3:28 pm

Egoslip wrote:

You're not that bad.. highly stylized though. Which can be a good thing, just don't forget to broaden your horizons :)

Yep, yep. Good advice, thanks :)

Sottaceti wrote:

Talk about clean lines, man.

Why thank you.

Matt wrote:

^

Do you use Gimp for ink?

No, I actually do my inking by hand.

Takeru wrote:

These are awesome.
I like the little sanji face lol

Thanks, I live how Sanji turned out too (I think you're the only one who noticed) :)

Bacon Barbarian · **Posted:** Mon Sep 27, 2010 8:13 pm

So, requests anybody? I'm not sure what to draw...

ozzaharwood · **Posted:** Mon Sep 27, 2010 8:20 pm

TAIGA

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