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 Post subject: -VoidBorn- (Pages 13-15, yo. Moving to new forum, also...)
PostPosted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:21 pm 
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For the same of convience, VB isn't going to be posted on this forum anymore after this. I'll be updating on this shrill weirdo thing instead :/ ; http://www.mangatutorials.com/forum/sho ... -must-flow!


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It's the future. The human race have become a boogeyman story for aliens to scare their naughty children with. Mastering warp travel and smashing planets with ease, the half-human "Voidborn" live entirely in space, jealously protecting the last pockets of the human race from natural extintion by annihilating everything in their way.

However, much to their chargin, they are still only mortal. A group called the "Lametares" has rebelled...

The pocket carrier "Diamondback" and it's crew are sent to track them down, so that the Voidborn fleet's full might can be brought to bear on them, before things get out of hand.


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Page 05; ((Minor edit 12/23/2010))
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Page 13 (NEW!);
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Hey again duderinos. :3

Call this Obsolete MKII. It's a bit more "space opera" and a bit less "realistic", so it shouldn't get boring as quickly. There will be alot more humour in this plot, too, despite that cryptic intro above....

Questions, harsh critique, comments and suggestions would all be mega appreciated. ;I


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 Post subject: Re: -VoidBorn- (3 page launch.)
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Fuck year! New Regcomic!

Jawesome as always, Regfish.

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 Post subject: Re: -VoidBorn- (3 page launch.)
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Holy shit, these pic's are really crisp. Sad to see Obsolete go, but I guess it isn't really gone, is it?

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 Post subject: Re: -VoidBorn- (3 page launch.)
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@Kodosguy; Mah sweet solitons, you were fast. Cheers dude. *_*

@Bacon; Yup! VoidBorn ate Obsolete's brains and gained it's knowlage. Let's just see if I can get this one rolling into some action scenes faster. ;I


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OOooo...interesting.

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 Post subject: Re: -VoidBorn- (3 page launch.)
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It's cool! Good pics and shading...
but I can't understand the picture in page 1 panel 2..

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 Post subject: Re: -VoidBorn- (3 page launch.)
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It's cool! Good pics and shading...
but I can't understand the picture in page 1 panel 2..

its the lady using the controls i think

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@Hammish; Reg tries. :3

@C-Fox; Thanks. Clouds took ages to tone. x_x

@LVUER; Cake is right. The control cabin is mega cramped, reaching the button to reset the cameras is not easy. :P

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Double thanks for the interest guys. The next page hops directly into plot-ness. May start posting concept art aswell, if people want...


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What the heck is happening in the 1st pannel?

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The mecha's camera was messed up. Zee button was for reseting it. :m

Anybody else find that massively confusing?... I may just fade it to black more to stop people straining over it too hard. x_x


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I think, what you need is a fixed view, and the pilot's reaction

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 Post subject: Re: -VoidBorn- (3 page launch.)
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Nice job, Reg! Looking forward to more... as usual, your art is super cool. I guess on the first page, a shot of the cameras after they were operational might've cleared up the purpose of the first frame, but whatever.

So much detail... very nice.

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 Post subject: Re: -VoidBorn- (Pages 4-5. Cover WIP. Space roaches, anyone?
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Bleh. Sorry guys. This update was supposed to be bigger and sooner. Kinda sick again lately. :/

Anyhow, added pages 4 to 5, plus edited page 1 with a little speech just to clear things up. For uber bonus, GETTALOADATHISSSS;

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It's a work in progress for the cover (or at least chapter title) page, containing the entire current cast. Will probally get full colour later. :3

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@ Bacon; Did the speech bubbles fix yur' problem? :o...

@ Nyarl-Guy; Thanks dude. I'm trying pretty hard with this again. Wish I had your consistancy. -_-


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 Post subject: Re: -VoidBorn- (Pages 4-5. Cover WIP. Space roaches, anyone?
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