Do i have to set up my story like this? Can i turn this into a manga? I need some help..
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Narrator: The World scenery looks peaceful.
Narrator: School bell rings.
Teacher: Class Dismissed!
Narrator: Everyone walks out of school talking and playing around.
Inky: [walking and looks aside.]
Boy: [jumps in the air; charging at Inky]
Inky: [looks in the air]
Boy: Think Fast! [Swings a punch at Inky]
Inky: [catches the boy’s hand and gets mad] who are you?
Boy: [Shocked and then laughs softly] I’m Kiddy Hoashi! You must be new here.
Inky: [let go of his hand and walks away]
Kiddy: Hey, Where you going?! You can at least introduce yourself too like I did!
Inky: [walks on and ignoring Kiddy]
Kiddy: Are you listening?
Narrator: They walk in Yumi’s restaurant.
Yumi: Hey! Welcome to Yumi’s restaurant! What can I get ya?
Inky: [looks at him in a bad way] I just want some water.
Kiddy: Nachos. Please!
Yumi: Um…coming up
Inky: [glances at Kiddy] why are you following me?
Kiddy: I’m not following you! I thought about coming here after school. [Gets mad]
Kiddy: But you look like a fighter…what’s your name?
Inky: I don’t fight…and I don’t tell strangers my name.
Kiddy: Hmm…okay when we leave here…how about we go to my place? I wanna show you something.
Inky: [looks at him and turns around] whatever…
Yumi: Here’s your water and here’s your nachos!
Inky: [grabs the water, drinks it and left]
Kiddy: [eats his some of his nachos, pay a tip and
Inky: What you gotta show me? [Looks at Kiddy]
Kiddy: Follow Me.
Narrator: They walk to Kiddy’s training place.
Inky: [thinking] what is this guy up to? This is a cool place though
Inky: Show me!
Kiddy: Okay! [Takes a deep breath and close his eyes]
Narrator: Energy flows around his body.
Kiddy: [screaming while powering up] Kaiten!!!
Inky: [Slight shocked] so this guy is like me?
Kiddy: [opens his eyes] this is my power!
Kiddy: What’s funny?
Inky: let me show you my power, kiddo!
Inky: [powers up outrageously]
Kiddy: [holds his balance] Darn this guy power is amazing!
Inky: [stops] this is my power
Kiddy: Cool! I wonder who’s stronger!
Inky: We won’t know that until we fought out! How about it?
Kiddy: Let’s do it!
Narrator: They started fighting.
Inky: You got some moves.
Kiddy: You not bad yourself…I thought you couldn’t fight!
Inky: [powers up] Hahhhh!
Kiddy: [powers up] let’s go at full power…Hahhh!
Inky: [powers up uncontrollably, eyes turn red]
Kiddy; [stops, shocked] what the?! His power is changing! What is he?
Inky: [Flash Drives in front of Kiddy and attacks him]
Kiddy: Ugh! A Flash Drive! Extreme Systemic: Fire-blast!
Narrator: Kiddy shoots a blast at Inky, but the blast bounces out.
Inky: [rushes at Kiddy with a punch but stop] what happen?
Inky: [looks around]
Old man: So it was you…that power I felt…come with me.
Kiddy: [gets up and looks]
Inky: Um…okay [walks to the old man] where we going?
Inky: [walks into the room] Okay! What now?
Old man: Take a seat.
Inky: [Sits down in Indian style]
Old man: Close your eyes and focus.
Old man: [places his hand on Inky’s forehead] Extreme Systemic: Kodou-Jushin!
Inky: [Screams and falls out]
Old man: [thinking] His power is unquestionable…Where this kid been all those years? I’m glad I finally found him.
Kiddy: Is everything okay? [Looks around and saw Inky on the ground] What happen?
Old man: [looks at Kiddy and walks out of the room] the boy’s power was incredible…If he would of punch you…there are no telling what would of happen…I had to seal him.
Kiddy: [shocked, thinking] His power is strong enough to do all that!
Old man: But he’s okay…he just need some rest…take him to a room for resting, my son. [Walks away]
Kiddy: Yes Father! [Picks up Inky and takes him to a room]
Narrator: lays Inky down in a bed.
Kiddy: [looks at him, thinking] His powers can do all of that…His was enormous…I really found a mysterious friend.
Inky: [Wakes up, going crazy] Where that’s old man? I’m going to give him so punches he’ll remember! Let me at him!
Kiddy: [laughs] Relax! You finally woke!
Inky: [Grabs Kiddy by the shirt] you didn’t even do anything, did you? You just let that old guy knock me out for no reason… that’s an off guard move.
Kiddy: Um…Inky that’s my father!
Inky: You’re what?
Kiddy: that’s Master Otha Hoashi…My master and father!
Inky: I’m still going to get him!
Kiddy: He help you out!
Inky: You think knocking me off guard was going to help me.
Kiddy: No not that! Your powers!
Inky: Huh? What about them?
Kiddy: When we were sparring around? You went out of control…if you would of punch me…I would of die, but you snap out of it in time…so my father seal you from those powers.
Inky: Oh [thinking] Theses power stay coming out again…I gotta harness this power… I gotta be carefully next time.
Kiddy: Well enough of that…You fight well, what‘s your name?…you wanna become my fighting partner?
Inky: It’s Inky.
Kiddy: [smiles] cool name…well it’s getting late so you can rest here if you want.
Narrator: Inky falls asleep.
Narrator: To be continuing…